Choose whether the pronoun reference in each of the following sentences is CORRECT or INCORRECT/CONFUSING.
Example: Mr. Collins told Jim, his colleague, that he had to stop taking such long lunch breaks.
answer: INCORRECT (It is unclear whether the "he" refers to Mr. Collins or Jim.)
1. Sarah would have driven Patricia home if she hadn't been so tired.
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2. His voice was so loud that he made some of the audience members uncomfortable.
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3. If Jim hadn't spent all his money gambling, he could have used it to buy his wife a present.
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4. Mr. Jonasson decided to postpone the final exam until the following week. This made his students happy.
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5. It said on the news today that a storm was on its way.
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6. Diane's cat Mittens, who was adopted from an animal shelter, slept by her head every night.
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7. Frank wanted to give Tony his old camera, but he was away on vacation.
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8. I never drink alcohol because it makes you sick.
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9. Ingrid lost the race and then went out and had some wine with her friends. Her coach was not happy about this.
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10. He started eating more fruit and vegetables. This improved his health and gave him more energy.
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Grammar review
A pronoun should have a clear reference. If a reader can't tell who or what it refers to, the sentence is confusing, even if the grammar is technically correct.
Two possible nouns:Sarah told Emma that her flight had been delayed. Whose flight, Sarah's or Emma's? Unclear. No clear referent:It mentioned in the email that the meeting was postponed. "It" isn't standing in for anything specific. "This" referring to a whole idea: this can be perfectly clear when the reference is obvious: He started eating more vegetables. This improved his health. Here, this refers to the change in his diet. It becomes a problem when several earlier ideas could be the intended reference.
Fix: repeat or name the intended noun or idea when the reference could otherwise be ambiguous.